I loved this! The way you built the scene, with the action in the background and up front, and the dialogue was so fun to read. Vampire characters are cool as hell in the first place but it's nice to see one using her immortality to bring change as opposed to just hanging around in the dark for thousands of years.
I always love a good vampire story and this is a really interesting concept. Your characters show so much personality in such a small space of time, Kassandra in particular is badass, and the whole scene is very intense. Another amazing story!
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I loved this! The way you built the scene, with the action in the background and up front, and the dialogue was so fun to read. Vampire characters are cool as hell in the first place but it's nice to see one using her immortality to bring change as opposed to just hanging around in the dark for thousands of years.
Thanks!
I always love a good vampire story and this is a really interesting concept. Your characters show so much personality in such a small space of time, Kassandra in particular is badass, and the whole scene is very intense. Another amazing story!
Thank you!!! I've been thinking about this story for quite a while, and decided to finally just write the dang thing.